I dream of laughing with you,
Under the sun.
I walk a mile with a smile,
But then the rain comes.
I dream of peaceful nights,
Under the stars.
I make a plan to hold your hand,
But then I push you too far.
I need you now,
More than you know I do;
But I can't catch my breath while my head is spinning.
I keep climbing, scraping, scratching and crawling,
And with every step I feel like I'm falling.
I dream of breathing,
Under your smile.
I begin to make you grin,
But then I cry for a while.
I dream of sleeping,
Under your skin.
I keep praying to my brain,
But it won't let me let you in.
I need you now,
More than I say I do;
But I'm so out of breath cause my brain is churning.
I keep slipping, choking, screaming and wailing,
And with every step I feel like I'm failing
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it's a beautiful poem i think
I hope you get better soon sweetie <3
Beautiful poem.
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the trick is to keep breathing.
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If life isn't worth living, why live it the way you are? Live it the way you want.
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Rivi
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ENJOY MY HAPPY
"I keep praying to my brain,
But it won't let me let you in." -- im am totally like that and its so frustrating!
i hope you find something to cheer you up soon
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~ praying for love and paying in naivety ~
I dunno I just confused myself to no avail.
But I think its so amazing how you can express your emotions like this.
You and Azu are so beautiful together...don't ever change.
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please check out *theunknownartists & ~DeviantAdoption!
Under the sun.
I walk a mile with a smile,
But then the rain comes.
love this ecspecially! ^^
beautiful poem!
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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.
Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
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The part of you
that's part of me
will never die,
will never leave,
and it's nobody else's but mine.
You are in my heart,
I can feel your beat.
Rest Peacefully, Ian.
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