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You, are flowers in my head,
Or maybe you're a stain instead;
But, you'll be there 'til im dead.
I'm, never certain what I'm supposed to do,
But I know I should include you;
You change my colors when I'm blue.

If, a soul had a sense of touch,
I'd run my fingers through yours so much;
And forget about breathing and such.
Staring, with my mind focused on your face,  
My heart's been running circles in place;
My fingers finding lines to trace.

Is this what I know,
Or is it something just for show?
I swear to god,
Or whoever lives up above;
My heart was made for yours when you need love.

Someplace, waits a world I'm required to know,
Out beyond any picture show;
In the midst of an afterglow.
Touch me, and in an instant time will be,
A new reality;
Something I've been expecting to see.

Is this what I think,
Or could I just be out of sync?
Maybe so,
And though the edges may be rough;
My heart was made for yours when you need love.
©2006-2009 ~3HoursAway
:icon3hoursaway:

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Was bored at work.

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:iconautumn-wind:
I really really love this piece. Beautiful and seemingly touching. <3 and fave*

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:icondarkphoenixbc:
"If, a soul had a sense of touch,
I'd run my fingers through yours so much;"


*warm* ^_^

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ANTI-SIGNATURE
:iconempty-phantom:
Oh my goodness....its so warm and fuzzy and touching and sweet and (could go on forever but you might get annoyed/bored so won't go on)


Thank you for giving the world your wonderful words.

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I stalk ~Phantasmicbunny:smooch:

please check out *theunknownartists & ~DeviantAdoption!
:iconjinubean:
this poem is so touching, it made me smile hehe

i especially like the line: "My heart was made for yours when you need love."

wonderful piece!

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Jinubean :chainsaw:
:iconeffervescentfx:
Its beautiful!

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gazerock is not dead. EVER.
"If you use your head, you won't get fat even if you eat sweets." L
:iconshaunarthur:
this is really sweet. i love it :+favlove:.
:iconazuzephre:
i think this is my favorite poem in your entire gallery. the interrupted flow and pro word choice makes it reaaaally good. *thumbsup*

Jeff

--
The part of you
that's part of me
will never die,
will never leave,
and it's nobody else's but mine.
You are in my heart,
I can feel your beat.

Rest Peacefully, Ian.
:icondeirdre-a:
the second to last stanza really reminds me of the song 'Afterglow' by INXS. beautiful song, beautiful poem. i really like this one :)

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Being half-dead wasn't what I planned to be;
Now I'm ready to be free...

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