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When I'm fast asleep,
My body feels you there.
The sound of your heartbeat,
Paints thrills in the air.
My smile floods the night,
As I dream of a lifetime with you.
We are tried and true.

When I'm all alone,
My soul aches for your touch.
The wind cries your name,
And I miss you so much.
I gaze through the sky,
As I ponder the times we've been through.
We are tried and true.

Day after day,
My heart keeps one name.
And only one angel,
Can ease all my pain.
Night after night,
I see only one light, and its you.
Yes, it's true.

When I'm wide awake,
I breathe through your heart.
And I long for the day,
That our lifetime will start.
I scream for your kiss,
Nobody exists but you.
We are tried and true.
©2006-2009 ~3HoursAway
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:iconlostdot:
Wow. o:
I really like the concept of "We are tried and true." :3

Now I wanna write something.. n____n -Inspired-

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:iconinsomniacs-nightmare:
That is beautiful. You have such a talent - I love the way that words just want to work for you. It's a real gift :)

I love the idea of painting thrills in the air. It puts a picture in my head.

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:iconazuzephre:
<3 i love how you use words so seemingly effortlessly. youre about to get a kiss/glomp combo attack, so brace yourself

: D i love you

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The part of you
that's part of me
will never die,
will never leave,
and it's nobody else's but mine.
You are in my heart,
I can feel your beat.

Rest Peacefully, Ian.
:iconnotalicious:
i like the way the love being described in the poem feels so complete

even though the two characters probably haven't met yet, or haven't stared their lifetime together yet ^^
:iconcosmic-witch:
Its so beautiful. Anyone who has been or is really in love will know it is exacly like that you have it descibed purfectly in this piece.
:iconorangecstar:
this is great. nice work.

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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream...- van Gogh
:iconflurbil:
It's powerful but subtley...hmm...I really like it It's beautiful!

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To live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong-Joseph Chilton Pearce
:iconamusantverteyeux:
"We are tried and true." love it. and beautiful the way you started it out with "When I'm fast asleep," and how you ended it with "When I'm wide awake," very creative.

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"Well sinade oh rebellion....shock me shock me shock me with that DEVIANT behavior"
:D
"NO MORE MUFFINS FOR YOU!!!! THE MUFFIN SHOPPE IS CLOSED!!!!"
;P
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:iconmychemicalpixie:
...This one made me cry. You're damn good, Ian. *still crying...pardon if any typos should occur*

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~*~MyChemicalPixie~*~Pixie Anarcho~*~
Don't Count On Me- I'm Not A Number.

Rest Peacefully, My Brother.
I love you and miss you more every day.

Eddie Anarcho
May 22, 1989-August 25,2007
.Punks.Don't.Die.
:iconprincesitabobita:
beautiful... its very nice.. :love:i love it

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