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The Bottom Line by ~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway:

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So what if you live there and I am here?
That's only in the right now.
A hazy future's becoming very clear.
Soon everyone will see,
That we're supposed to be.

Anyone could say that we will never last;
Anyone could knock us down.
Anyone could doubt us, but they have no proof.
I'll scream, "I love you!" from the roof;
Cause that's the honest truth.

Who cares if miles separate our touch?
That's only temporary.
Nobody else could ever mean this much.
I'll soon be next to you,
Doing everything you do.

Anyone could laugh and say it'll never work;
Anyone could put us down.
Anyone could tell us the future's never known;
But with you I'll never be alone;
And that's just set in stone.

You know, and I am sure that you got it right;
We got so lucky finding out on the first night.
It's only the lonely fool,
That's bound by love's cruel rule.

Anyone could say that we're just in a phase;
Anyone could beat us down.
Anyone could try to push us off cloud nine;
But knowing I am yours and you are mine;
Well, that's the bottom line.
©2005-2009 ~3HoursAway
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Oooohhh just another long distance relationship thingy. I was so bored at school today and it was like a fricken OVEN in there. Thank god this is the last week of classes.
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~unseen-soul:iconunseen-soul: Jun 6, 2005, 2:30:36 PM
Wow,k that was really good a lot of emotion and great imgery i like it. Could you please visit my page and leave me some tips on how i could improve some of my poetry.

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~TheElfenbein:iconTheElfenbein: Jun 6, 2005, 2:32:05 PM
T.T You peoples will last forever. :nod:
Are you gonna plan on meeting sometime?
/end personal question

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~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway: Jun 6, 2005, 2:40:20 PM
Thanks...sure I'm gonna check it out.
=suk0shi-hamu:iconsuk0shi-hamu: Jun 6, 2005, 2:40:45 PM
i think we just talked about this and how i feel about it. (: you guys rock. <3
as a more technical comment, GREAT poem, love the way you built it. very pleasant to the ear/eye/whatever. :P
<3!

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the trick is to keep breathing.
=suk0shi-hamu:iconsuk0shi-hamu: Jun 6, 2005, 2:41:54 PM
i think we just talked about this and how i feel about it. (: you guys rock. <3
as a more technical comment, GREAT poem, love the way you built it. very pleasant to the ear/eye/whatever. :P
<3!

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the trick is to keep breathing.
~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway: Jun 6, 2005, 2:56:55 PM
Thanks! I appreciate that :) And tell Rui to write stuff about you!
~SilveryNightsky:iconSilveryNightsky: Jun 6, 2005, 2:57:31 PM
You've got a rhythm going. Carefree, fast paced - could be made into an upbeat song - awesomeness

If only I could write lyrics.
=suk0shi-hamu:iconsuk0shi-hamu: Jun 6, 2005, 2:59:58 PM
hahaha i'm glad with his tiny manifestations on exam calendars. ^.^
*bounces around*

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the trick is to keep breathing.
~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway: Jun 6, 2005, 3:00:32 PM
^>^ I wish I could sing and play the geeeetar!
~empty-phantom:iconempty-phantom: Jun 6, 2005, 3:14:02 PM
thats pretty.. and it reminds me of myself and my bf... especailly with me going to europe in august... BUT I lorve it anyway

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