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January 2, 2006
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My soul is set on perfect,
Engulfed by your embrace.
My heart stood next to frozen,
Softened by your fingerís trace.

Iím hypnotized,
By the way you breathe.
My oxygen,
Is the love you weave.

Foreverís closing in;
And soon weíll be,

My skin is set on passion,
Excited by your touch.
Maybe Iím too dramatic.
Maybe I think too much.

Iím mesmerized,
By your simple grin.
Iím bounded by,
The love within.

Foreverís closing in;
And soon weíll be,
I'm so hyper and floaty.


o.O Well, it still looks cool backwards :p
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LP-lover Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2008
I know you can't read this but this is very beautiful Ian.
agnijith Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Touching, full of emotion and imagination...
I just love it.
youliedanyway Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
This is a lovely poem. Your poetry is very good. it is so full of emotion and so heartfelt. I just LOVE it so much! I wish I could fave it all, but I need to go to bed an study, please keep posting more!!!

oh, btw, I've friended you, and, since I like your poetry so DAMN much, I'm gonna tell people to read it wether your friend me back or not. Just so you know. I'll be out there, soliciting for ya!
whitefeathered-raven Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2006   Writer
This makes me cry...'cause I just lost someone I love... And because this is so well done that I can relate to it....such a good job...
Reioa-DeFoe Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I love this because it's pretty accurate to how people in love feel. It's a wonderful work. ^^
wetblackink Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2006   Writer
Shyhone Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2006
aww thats so cute
3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2006
:D thanks!
Deep-Ponderer Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2006   Photographer
Pure Beauty.
Really though, this is undescribable for words. It's impossible to explain how "amazing" (is all i can think of) this poem is in the English Language, and any other language for that matter.
It's that great.
I admire you.
Your gift is perfect, suiting you wholy, fully, totally.
Extra favage.
ElaclairesSkies Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2006
Aw, this is so cute :heart: I'd put up some of my personal poems, but I don't know if they'd be as good as this

:love: it
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