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I'm Sorry You Made Me Cry by ~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway:



You made me strong.
And I never planned on being shattered,
But I was wrong;
Cause I went to sleep beat up and battered.

I'm sorry you made me cry.
I never wanted it to happen.
I never wanted you responsible,
Because I know you didn't try.

You made me steel,
And reinforced me with confidence.
But this was real,
And the feelings were just way too intense.

I'm sorry you made me cry.
I didn't want you in this position.
I never wanted you responsible,
Because I know you didn't try.

I'm telling you now,
I'll never do this again.
It's not fair to have put it on your head.
It's plain to see,
How you feel about me.
And that can bring me back from the dead.

You made me stone,
I never thought I could be broken.
But I felt alone,
Not understanding the words you'd spoken.

I'm sorry you made me cry.
It never really should have happened.
I never wanted you responsible,
Because I know you'd rather die.
©2005-2009 ~3HoursAway
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:icontreesgohaha:
love this poem. great work. :heart:
:icon3hoursaway:
Wow...thanks! That was fast lol
:iconneneisme:
THIS is GREAT!! :clap::clap::clap:
wish u all d best for the 2 of u!!
:hug:

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:iconneesh003:
amazing as always. *sniffle* yesh, quite good and makes me sniffly ._. darn you and your ability to envoke my emotions~

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:icon3hoursaway:
:) Thanks for reading it.
:iconcosmic-witch:
Beautiful as always.
:iconshingy:
Good poem, flows nicely.

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I love this so much, its so emotional!:tears:

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