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You must think that I'm stupid,
Or that my brain has broken down.
I've poured it out to you from my heart,
But I've said nothing too profound.

And still you won't believe me.
You just tell me how to feel.
You must think I'm made of paper,
But I will tell you now that I'm completely real.

What can I do to make you see?
How can I make you believe in me?
I'm not the little kid that I used to be.
Because the way I feel makes me completely real,

And I'm not opposed to telling you the deal.

My manner's not been perfect,
I think we can agree.
You provided me with vision,
But I don't need your eyes to see.

Why won't you believe me?
You'd rather see me cry.
You must think I'm a loser,
But I can't figure out the reasons why.

What can I say so that you'll understand?
You can't control the life I have planned.
You try to keep me down by holding my hand,
And you make me cry without a reason why.

Well, I'm not opposed to telling you goodbye.

Are my feelings unimportant?
Are things just said and done?
I hope you change your mind,
Before you lose your one and only son.

No disrespect, but I'm moving along.
Maybe it's your fault that I've turned out this strong.
I'm not one bit afraid, because I'm just not wrong.
And when it's said and done, you'll have another son.

Cause, I'm not opposed to showing you I've won.
©2005-2009 ~3HoursAway
:icon3hoursaway:

Author's Comments

Hmmmm well, I think i like this one. It's the first one in a long time that's not really written TO Jeff, even though it's about him and us. It's written to my parents, though.

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:iconazuzephre:
dO_Ob such emotion you have young jedi. (oh yeah i have a story about mrs hao and jedis to tell you) but really, this has quite a bit of emotion in it and wow. youre so emo sometimes. i love it. < 3

--
The part of you
that's part of me
will never die,
will never leave,
and it's nobody else's but mine.
You are in my heart,
I can feel your beat.

Rest Peacefully, Ian.
:iconburningdollhouse:
grr i say, grr! you tell 'em! More power to ya man!
:iconsweetpeaskuld:
Have u shown them this poem??? u should!! It's beautiful and I think they'd be surprise at how emotional u rX3 I love this poem and +fav :hug:
:icononlineagent:
I can only guess what EXACTLY this is about, but I know what it sounds like to me. I'm not sure how to describe it but this is exactly what I think about mine...
:icongiolythe:
Why do I have a feeling that not everything will get across to them if they read this? It makes so much sense but for some reason I can still see people not getting this... Great poem, now if only I could figure out what's actually going through my own head I'd say something, but since I can't al I'll say is, good luck with that and hopefully they'll see that you are your own person, someone of thought who knows the possibilities..... ok... yeah, good luck.
:icon3hoursaway:
You hair must have rubbed off on me...No wait that sounded perverted o.O :hugs:
:icon3hoursaway:
*makes tiger face* grrrr!!!
:icon3hoursaway:
LOL they know I'm an emotional nightmare :D Benefits of being an only child, I get to throw tantrums lol Thanks for the fav KID *hugs*

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