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It's good times,
Just to know you that you are mine.
It's good times,
Just to know I'm at the end of your rhyme.
It's good times,
That my anxious heart is a part of your design.
It's good times,
Just to know that I am enough;
It's good stuff.

It's good times,
When you make me smile wide without trying.
It's good times,
To taste the salt on your neck when I'm crying.
It's good times,
That you hold my hand when my happiness is dying.
It's good times,
When I know we'll get to play a little rough;
It's good stuff.

Nobody else,
Will ever succeed,
In giving me everything that I need.
Always believe,
And know that it's true,
Forever, I'm gonna be next to you.

It's good times,
When I rest my head on your thigh.
It's good times,
When you plant a wet kiss on my behind.
It's good times,
When I wake you up with a finger down your spine.
It's good times,
Just to know that we are in love;
It's good stuff.
Just to make it clear. I love :heart:Jeff Thomas!:heart:
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

L:heart:VES
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:icondelinquentsshrine:
DelinquentsShrine Featured By Owner May 20, 2006  Professional Photographer
now i feel all alone... and hated **sigh** its awsome-tastic tho!!! i like the rhyme pattern
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LemBlack Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2005   Traditional Artist
One thing is clear ...You love Jeff it's a fact !!! I don't know you but you two seems so ... happy together. It's cool !

Just continues to have *Good times*:)
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patukumchan Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005
:clap: :blackrose: Congrats on winning the "Wonder Works" Award by teh Patukum. What will you do now? :D
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Dark-Lord-Shrimpy Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2005
I dont normally read poetry because i never find any that interest me, but you've captivated me, so much that i'm ditching my science report for your gallery. I really felt something in *points to chest* in there when i read this. You're an amaing poet! :+fav:
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Mooseh Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2005  Professional Photographer
" Just to know that we are in love;
It's good stuff. "

It's so true. So perfect.
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ElaclairesSkies Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2005
God you are phenominal with the words of a true poet!!! You and Azuzephre have talent and are truly perfect for eachother!! You are each others happiness. And your words strike beauty to my heart.

:clap: :clap: :clap:
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Kaira1998 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
gawd, you two are just so cute together.... me ish so jealous >< lol, I wish I could write.... lucky, lol I can't draw that well either.... I don't even know what I'm doing on DA T_T, but yeah, luv you're poetry (and I haven't even read all of it yet!) I'll be watching you XD *adds to friends list* ^^

~Kaira
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Oinari Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2005  Student
OMG your poetry gets better and better, almost everything, if not everything, you write for Jeff is so tender and loving *ish envious*.
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trixie31 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2005
That is amazing! I love your poem. Nice structure.
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Bakaar Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2005
This is a really cute, uplifting poem. Such a "happy" way to look at love. :love:
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etherealbeing Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2005
mmm love it...i always run across your stuff and love it...why am i not watching you...:watches you:
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2005
thanks!
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The-Perfect-Failure Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Just to know that we are in love;
It's good stuff.

It's good times,
To taste the salt on your neck when I'm crying.

My favorite lines in the poem! They're so cute! *squeal* And yes, the times must be very very good for you and Azu [Thinks of the car commercial that goes 'zoom zoom zoom'] Although the part of planting kisses on your behind kind of gave me an icky feeling. I sure as hell wouldn't want anyone going near MY butt, much less kissin' it. But hey, since your butt is seven times larger than your head, theres a lot to love, right? Yes yes.

And, um, about the picture I said I was gonna draw, I finally decided which idea I am gonna draw but now my internet is broken at my moms and I would really like to CG it. So it might take a while, but I promise you'll like the results! The idea I have is uber cute! *squeals in delight*

So sorry it might take so long. *sob* But I promise to get it up EVENTUALLY. Anyways, cute poem! *yay*
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2005
Thanks for writing so much...I love it every time :)
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The-Perfect-Failure Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Yay! I'm glad! I have a rambling tendency and sometimes I'm worried that people find it really annoying so I'm so glad you like to hear my *aherm* words of wisdom. I dont know how great my art is, but I'm a good reviewer! *yay*
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paul-beaulieu Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2005
Congratulate me Ian! I read a whole poem! *waves flags* This one is great. The rhythm and the rhymes work well together.
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2005
Thanks PauL! :D and congratulations!
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:iconpaul-beaulieu:
paul-beaulieu Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2005
I feel loved. :XD:
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BetrayedRage Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
that's really sweet. i like it! i bet jeff feels really loved. ^_^ i'm glad u guys are so in luuuuuvvvvv or love whatev ^_~
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Shyhone Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
i love it That you have so much passion because every time i try to write poetry it always turns out like a hateful suicide note and i dont like that
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
Aww thanks. But you know..you should write what you're feeling cause that will always be the best stuff....it might not be what you'd like to do, but you have to feel it or it wont come off good at all. Thats what I think anyways.
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Shyhone Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2005
thanks for the tip
you are :#1:
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2005
Better than smelling like number two! :D
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suk0shi-hamu Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer

awesomeeee xD
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you ruleeeee. :love:
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autumn-wind Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
pretty work! ^^
sweet~
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blonde-lama Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
that is soooooo cute :):)
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elusiveastruth Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
awww. you guys are adorable.
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strangemuse Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
Duuude. The acclaim!

Put this to music and I'll second everything. :XD:
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
*gasp and has heart attack* lol Thank you dude! Hey do you play guitar or drums...you seem like you would play an instrument of some nature :-/
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strangemuse Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Guitar. :D Only a little though. Why, do you?
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
Newp...I don't. I wish I could learn. I feel so uncoordinated when I try.
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:iconstrangemuse:
strangemuse Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
Get yourself one of those Learn to Play books and start from there. :D I did!
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:icon3hoursaway:
3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
And a guitar! lol
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:iconstrangemuse:
strangemuse Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2005
That would help too. :S
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celina-chan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
Beautiful...As always. Just beautiful.
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billybob110288 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
i love this, i love the style of writing my dear da brother hehehe soo much passion in this piece
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Thanks widdle sissa!
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PaigePennyfeather Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
wow. that is so awesome! i love the way you wrote this one. its very clear you are in love, and i think its wonderful
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Thanks Beth! We already knew that though lol
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PaigePennyfeather Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
you're welcome! :D
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ZandraSaiquies Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
Wow. Great work! ^^ :+favlove: Beautiful work. Absolutly stunning. ^^
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Thank you! That was so sweet :)
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Aether-Merula Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005   Writer
That's so sweet!! It would sound great as a song... to piano.
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:iconpaul-beaulieu:
paul-beaulieu Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2005
Thats what me and my friend are doing. Don't worry, I asked Ian if we could do it. But anyway, I'm playing piano and my friend is doing guitar and bass. It's really awesome.
(I was re-reading the poem and looking at old comments...thats why I just commented on one from...July:D)
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Aether-Merula Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2005   Writer
I want a copy, yo.
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:iconpaul-beaulieu:
paul-beaulieu Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2005
Haha hopefully we'll be able to record. The first copy will obviously go to Ian. But after that, who knows?
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Aether-Merula Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2005   Writer
THEN MEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
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:iconpaul-beaulieu:
paul-beaulieu Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2005
Haha alrighty then!
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darkangelxx Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2005
Beautiful. I'm so jealous of how you can make your words flow so smoothly... and rhyme so well. I have my good moments, but never as good as that. I keep saying it and I'll always believe it: You two are so adorable together. :)
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Thanks! You made me smiiiile
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