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I know it's wrong,
But an envious shade of green has found a life around my skin.
I am wrong,
But everyone you see today will talk to you again.
So I am pissed off at your friends;
They get to sit near you again;
They get to look at you again;
And I just write to you with a lonley hand.
I'm envious.

I know it's wrong,
But the jealousy and anger's taken hold inside my mind.
I am wrong,
But everyone you're near today can see you all the time.
So, I am pissed off at your friends;
They get to walk with you again;
They get to talk to you again;
And I just wait for loneliness to end.
I'm envious.

I shouldn't sound insane, but they can all go screw.
It's sucks that I'm not filling the space right next to you.

I know it's wrong,
But I'm choking on my sorrow and I have been for a while.
I am wrong,
But everyone you're with today will get to see you smile.
So, I am pissed off at your friends;
They get to laugh with you again;
They get to joke with you again;
And I can only dream I'm one of them.
I'm envious.
Oh, I dunno. I was just being pissy cause everyone gets to hang out with my boyfriend except for me :-/
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Chuchkit Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2006
awwww.....
:cry:
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The-Perfect-Failure Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
know it's wrong,
But I'm choking on my sorrow and I have been for a while.
I am wrong,
But everyone you're with today will get to see you smile. (*thumbs up*)

*sniff* I love you o___o Your poetry is ... is .... is ... *melt*

:hug:
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2005
thanks :)
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The-Perfect-Failure Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
:D No problem! And welcome! *runs off to print your poems and smother them across her walls* XD lol
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coolvamp007 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2005
WOW! So beautiful and full of feeling! I understand exactly what you mean cuz I used to have the same problem with a guy. But dont worry, I bet your boyfriend will understand too and both will solve the problem! =)
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Nymphal Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2005
not sure what your situation is but it really sounds like you rarely see your significant other. it makes me feel pathetic... i can hardly go 2 days! it is all because i'm used to waking him up every single morning for school and having breakfast with him, now we have opposite scheduals between his school and my work. he heads to the bars sometimes with they guys, and i can go because i'm too young.

i really enjoy your writing, very simple and straight to the point. sometimes the simple things in life get overlooked when they are truely the most beautiful. keep it up, hope to read more from you.

Tara
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DarkRaven21 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2005
..Sorry to hear it :(...:hug:..
..I hope you could meet with him by now.....
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2005
lol me too!
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DarkRaven21 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2005
..:D...
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empty-phantom Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2005   Photographer
I know what you mean but its not his friends alone they're my friends too. and It bothers me so MUCH.
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