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Chin Up by ~3HoursAway:icon3HoursAway:

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I don't know why you say those things about him.
I know he's not that way;
He's nothing like the things you say.
Emotion is tossing your mind around,
So you're blind to all the things I've found.

I'm with you until the end;
But you piss me off when you ,
Talk that way about my best friend.

I don't know why you talk like that about him.
The things you say aren't true;
I won't let you help him come unglued.
Emotion is flowing from head to toe,
So you're blind to all the things I know.

Chin up, chin up,
Isn't that what you say?
Tomorrow will be a brand new day.
Chin up, chin up,
I'll be here for you,
To remember what's really inside of you.

I don't know why you have to be mean about him.
He's beautiful inside;
Angels that live should never hide.
Emotion is kicking you to the floor,
So you're blind to the things that I adore.

I'm with you until the end;
But you piss me off when you,
Talk that way about my best friend.
©2006-2009 ~3HoursAway
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Author's Comments

My friend is going through a hard time right now. And as much as I love him, he does one thing that I don't like very much, which is taking all the blame, and condescending himself. Anyways, this is a poem to him and about him. The perspective is me being angry at someone for dissing my best friend, but the person im talking to IS my best friend. I have no idea if that made sense.

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~DarkPhoenixBC Jul 19, 2006, 6:06:37 PM
I think I get it; you're telling your best friend to stop talking that way about himself? Cool. Hope he gets the message.

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~ghostwhitehorse Jul 19, 2006, 7:14:00 PM
:+fav: What you are saying makes perfect sense, matter the fact I know somebody a bit like your bestfriend; doesn't treat himself well at all. . . . .

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~empty-phantom Jul 19, 2006, 9:02:28 PM
Oh gosh, Ian that was so beautiful!!! <33333

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~autumn-wind Jul 20, 2006, 4:59:32 AM
the way you write it has a beautiful concept <3
Wonderful writer; that's what you are! :D

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Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
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~tryfanmolee Jul 20, 2006, 5:54:14 AM
^^ Very beautifally written ian. :hug:

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!sadkiller321 Jul 20, 2006, 8:44:45 AM
:D its great :+fav:

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So let's not get hurt. I want to live another day.


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~xXMinnaXx Jul 21, 2006, 12:01:03 AM
Oh amazing Ian!! what a beautiful piece :] I love it soooooooo much. Wow, you're such a brilliant writer! your word choice is so clever, and you can really feel the emotion in it! awesome job! <3 <3

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~spreadingmywings Jul 21, 2006, 7:40:06 AM
perfectly written, and it makes all the sense in the world. i hope your friend realizes how wonderful he must be if he has friends like you to tell him.
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~jinubean Jul 21, 2006, 6:49:29 PM
sweet :heart: it

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