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You live to love.
You love to give.
You give your love.
Your love is big.
Your big heart smiles.
Your smile is bright.
Your brightness blinds.
You're blind to spite.
You spit at hate.
You hate to cry.
You cry to love.
Your love is fate.
Your fate is real.
You really try.
You try to love.
To love, you'd die.
For my Anti-Emo boy

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:iconnekromantiafox:
NekromantiaFox Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Student General Artist
EMO stands for emo-core, which is a form of self-expressive punk music. I am an emo. Yes, I do have depression, but that is because I have manic depressive disorder. NOT BECAUSE I AM EMO.

All of that aside, this is a beautifully emotional poem.
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Caebbie Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Student General Artist
I am anti-emo because I have graduated from that crap.
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Mellow-Striker911 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
I love the way you written this :) it's very awesome and has a very good message

though the title makes me uncomfortable :| it's still good though
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:iconyou-are-dazzling:
you-are-dazzling Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
<3 :)
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:icondog-of-nightshade:
dog-of-nightshade Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008
a wonderful message
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Meteora731 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
This is beautiful!
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KandiViXenKHAOS-92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not too hot about the title :/...
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goffikmarysueplz Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009   Writer
[What's wrong with it?]
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KandiViXenKHAOS-92 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"anti-emo"
>_<
I'm not emo, but I try not to judge...though...they do wine about stuff a lot...
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goffikmarysueplz Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2009   Writer
[Yes, they do...:/]
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KandiViXenKHAOS-92 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:nod:
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:iconlegionbm:
legionBM Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008
you have right, fuck all emos
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xXMushRoomie Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008   Traditional Artist
Whowh, I like it :3
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:iconxxmelissa-charlesxx:
Xxmelissa-charlesxX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Professional Writer
this is quite beautiful <3
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whitefloweronmygrave Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
That's really good, you're very talented ^^. :+fav:
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:iconanimebobbles:
animebobbles Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
awwwwwwwwww !
i really love this, great job ! (L)
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:iconezer4him:
Ezer4Him Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful!
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:iconsticker28:
sticker28 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
This is a really nice poem, loved it!!!
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SeikaKitsune Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
awwa i love this.
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Chemicalbonbonne Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008
Aaah, I completely agree. ^^
Oh devotion, how lovely it is. <3
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Chechylandiia Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
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xxLostHeartxx Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008
>.>
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:iconcrazyyetstupid:
crazyyetstupid Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
i :heart: this poem with much love

good job! :thumbsup:
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:iconconvulsedxswan:
convulsedxswan Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2007
i love thisss!<3333
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:iconmmp13:
mmp13 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
Beatiful...thats all I have to say. It was very beatiful.Keep writing, okay. Luv ya!




xoxoxoxo,
mmp13
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mimiisphotoshopped Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2007
beautiful :]
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:iconpieceofpuzzle:
PieceOfPuzzle Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2007
true!
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:iconkira-yagami:
Kira-Yagami Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2007
hehe i love it, its beautiful, being emo i understand what your saying:)
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:iconoddgonzo:
OddGonzo Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
ooooo pretty...it touches me deep inside
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:iconhaaaaruka:
haaaaruka Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2007   Traditional Artist
Awesome. +fav
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:iconprometherion:
Prometherion Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2007
this very well written.
has a great meter and overall makes sense. Good job!!

hails!!
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johndeand Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2007  Student Photographer
idk if i've commented already, but i fav'd a while back and i still come back every once in a while to read this amazing poem!!! it's so beautiful!
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dragonheart666 Featured By Owner May 12, 2007
wow i like the flow...
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:iconbusinka:
businka Featured By Owner May 3, 2007
aaaaaaaaaaah! It burns, it buuuuuuuuuuurns!!!! lol :rofl:
The poem is beautiful though, very very nice. Amazing in fact, :nod:
Just... too much happiness and hope.... to much cheery stuff... too much love...
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Alixiel Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007
I like the structure.
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:iconmctatz:
mctatz Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2006   Writer
beautiful...loved it
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taniathepirate Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006  Student Artisan Crafter
i really like this, it's very meaningful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconloveregrets:
LoveRegrets Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2006
I really love your writting! It's so sweet ! o.O
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EternalMisery Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2005
Oh man, I can't believe you fit so much meaning in such a short poem.

Kudos to you.
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cloudstrife54 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2005   Interface Designer
Certainly one of the most rythmic, flowing poems I've read in quite a while. Keep it up, you have a great gallery here, ^^
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3HoursAway Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
Thanks : D oh and nice ralphie quote on your sig *thumbsup*
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:iconmaliii:
maliii Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2005
COOL!! ^^ I love it.
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The-Perfect-Failure Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
wow ... o_O I couldnt do that ... it sounds difficult ... Good job! It flows so perfect. ... whooOOaaaAA....
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SilveryNightsky Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2005
deep man, deep
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:iconvodka-37:
vodka-37 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2005
It's soo cute. :heart:
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:iconlemblack:
LemBlack Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2005   Traditional Artist
Yeah very good and great repetion .
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bw13187 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005
I guess I didn't like the 'flowy connections' that everybody else did. Starting every line with the ending word on the last line came across as forced in a couple circumstances, and was kind of gimmicky over-all. It reminded me of the way little kids talk, or would right poetry, really simplistically, you know.

However, it wasn't terrible. I like how the first line is, "you live to love", and the last one is, "to love, you'd die." That was a nice touch.
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flappability Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005
Oh. My.

This is amazing. It looked like a really really simple poem at first. And it is. But the way you put such a simple meaning together, with such simple words just makes me smile. I love it. I love how the edge-word of one line, echos and it begins the next. And the ending seals it all with a snappy-clank.

Donuts for you. :donut:
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ACertainEuphoria Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
wow man... truly awesome
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Laydesa Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005
Bravo... simply said with a slendid tounge
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