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Will I see you tonight?
Will you visit again when I turn off the light?
My arms unfurl, ever welcoming you;
My heart awaits, filled with passions anew.

Will I see you tonight?
Will you whisper soft breaths that unfold the moonlight?
My soul awaits, restless for one simple kiss;
My mind soars, elating over tastes my lips miss.

And I wait,
For the dark,
To descend.

And I wait,
For my love,
To soar in.

And I wait,
For his wings,
To grin.

And I wait,
For my dreams,
To begin.
©2006-2009 ~3HoursAway
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I like falling asleep to happy thoughts.

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:icondeirdre-a:
And I wait,
For my dreams,
To begin.


beautiful. <3

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Now I'm ready to be free...
:iconsadkiller321:
this is beautiful. :heart:

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So let's not get hurt. I want to live another day.


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I love the last four stanzas, especially the very last.

The last two lines of the second stanza are a little awkward, difficult to grasp; although emotion-evoking nonetheless.

But -- wow. You have so much talent.

It's beautiful. I'm stunned.

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"Forgive, O Lord, my little jokes on Thee
And I'll forgive Thy great big one on me." -Robert Frost
:iconeikaj:
soo pretty, so full of love.
i love this alot!

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:iconlostdot:
Woww. I really like it. n__n
Beautiful.

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:iconempty-phantom:
Aww it makes me want to sleep and dream ^-^

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:iconmychemicalpixie:
You write so beautifully. What a poet you are, mr. Ian.

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Rest Peacefully, My Brother.
I love you and miss you more every day.

Eddie Anarcho
May 22, 1989-August 25,2007
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:iconpatukumchan:
I'm stunned at the beauty of your words.
:heart:

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:icondarkdraven:
Utterly amazing and so beautiful. :heart:

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